It's a one-minute song
...and I voted five anyway, since I liked the main riff.
After that... erm... it kinda went downhill. The piano lacked reverb, and there's no... order.
Now, if what you intended to portray is the life cycle of a computer (cool at first, sucks later on -- 1 minute = 1 computer year; when it hits the pits, replace with a new one), then you did a great job, for as long as the audience understood your piece. (Of course, this is a wild assumption.)
Had fun, by the way. ^_^